- writing assignment -
my pets that I have had
I have been living with my cat since last year. She is my first pet. I've never had any pets before her because I had an allergy to animal fur. I still remember when I first saw her. She was very small and pretty, but I was afraid of her because of my allergy. I coudn't touch or hug her but she always wanted to be with me. She scratched the door while I was in the bathroom and at night, she would always climb up into my bed and surprise me. As time went by, we live togeter for one year and she is no longer a kitten. I can hug her whenever I want. She is still lovely. If she succeeds on her diet, she will be prett
ier than she is now.
posted by start2000t @ 10:14 AM
3 Comments:
You have found a good friend in your pet cat. Does it have a name? What color is it? How big is it? Can you give some specific information about it like what it likes to eat or play with?
What you have written tells me why the cat is your friend, but it does not help me see the cat.
Don't forget to put a comma with the coordinating conjunction in sentences like these:
"I coudn't touch or hug her, but she always wanted to be with me."
"As time went by, we live togeter for one year, and she is no longer a kitten."
my cat is nabee... it means that butterfly in english. she is 1 yearold , but she is bigger than other cats which are same yearold whit her. she likes to play with me by her hands,so i have a lot of scratch on my body from her
DO YOU LIKE CATS ALOT, IF SO MOST OF MY FRIENDS HAVE LOTS OF CATS AND THERE ARE ALOT OF THEM.
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